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Stukes 08-29-2006 10:19 AM

Calling All Creative People!
 
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I am setting up a new private mortgage investment banking company and I have created a few logo designs for the business and i am seeking constructive feedback - please let me know what you think and feel free to offer your creativity.

The company is called JayCap Financial and its primary business is to provide short-term commercial financing (secured by a first mortgage instrument with a term of 18 months or less) more known as bridge financing for commercial construction, acquisition, etc.

The other key aspect to the business is to sell the mortgage to investors providing them with an above average rate of return. So my company serves 2 markets - the borrowers are typically commercial developers and realestate entrepreneurs - and investors, typically 35 -40 years old plus, has familiarity with real estate and mortgage investing and is interested in a moderate level of risk and return.

Thunder22 08-29-2006 10:50 AM

Red is not good for financial companies, stick with blue, it projects stability and confidence.

I like the logo with the pyramid to the left and text to the right.

AutoXer 08-29-2006 11:12 AM

Then how about some green for $$$'s. Is your primary market in Canada?

broknlgs24 08-29-2006 11:16 AM

off topic, nice avatar.
back to the topic, i like the logo in the lowest left corner.

LeMansX5 08-29-2006 11:28 AM

Like the 2nd last in 1st column.

BMW X5 08-29-2006 11:32 AM

i like the last row as for colors of the logo i think blue/gray is a nice combination however i would do it on a blue/gray background with white lettering (think Goldman and Morgan)

Stukes 08-29-2006 11:52 AM

Thanks for the quick feedback, I really appreciate and value your opinions!

My target market at this time is Western Canada and perhaps Ontario, Canada. Arizona, would likely be my first move down south.

Xtreme53 08-29-2006 11:55 AM

Just some quick advice, shrink down the images to see how they will look on Business Cards and Letterhead. Some of the images may not look good when shrunk down.

jwilburn 08-29-2006 11:57 AM

Last grouping, first one on top left. Since your company is new, the name is the most important thing right now. Once you get your name out there then the peripheral logo design can be nailed down. I also agree with trying to stay away from red for the same reason stated. (even in power point, never use red when talking about numbers).

IMHO the triangle to the left creates a cleaner look, while still showing your name. Plus it also offers just that little bit more of space when you use that as your letter head.

Stukes 08-29-2006 12:03 PM

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Originally Posted by jwilburn
Last grouping, first one on top left. Since your company is new, the name is the most important thing right now. Once you get your name out there then the peripheral logo design can be nailed down. I also agree with trying to stay away from red for the same reason stated. (even in power point, never use red when talking about numbers).

IMHO the triangle to the left creates a cleaner look, while still showing your name. Plus it also offers just that little bit more of space when you use that as your letter head.

Excellent feedback, thanks for your suggestions!

rayxi 08-29-2006 12:14 PM

I like the last one. It looks more balanced and symetrical. Consider extending the letter P down just like the J so that the word FINANCIAL is centered between them. The logo looks a bit large relative to the name so make a few versions with varying sized to see which one works for you.

AWD-X5 08-29-2006 12:36 PM

You could off course go totally different!

Here are three ideas

http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a2...5/a3d0439e.jpg

http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a2...5/93565a95.jpg

http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a2...5/c56046d3.jpg

I'm at home shuttering up my house! for the storm - so I had a little spare time on my hands!

BMW X5 08-29-2006 12:37 PM

i hope you guys will be alright with the storm.

Stukes 08-29-2006 12:46 PM

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Originally Posted by AWD-X5
You could off course go totally different!

Here are three ideas

http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a2...5/a3d0439e.jpg

http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a2...5/93565a95.jpg

http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a2...5/c56046d3.jpg

I'm at home shuttering up my house! for the storm - so I had a little spare time on my hands!

I wish you and all in the path of the storm much safety... I hear that Ernesto is not yet that strong and it is to hit your shores tonight!

I love your creative ideas! They each certainly have their place in special situations.

AWD-X5 08-29-2006 01:07 PM

I'm sure we will be okay. Ernesto looks like it will be more of a rain event than a windy one! My house is like a bat cave at the moment :-) The shutters do not let much light in!

BMW X5 08-29-2006 01:12 PM

good thing is its named after a guy most of those storms besides andrew were female so we can be hopefull

LVGirl 08-30-2006 12:02 AM

I like the last one, bottom left - blue lettering with "financial" under the "cap" ....

Stukes 08-30-2006 04:09 PM

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Originally Posted by LVGirl
I like the last one, bottom left - blue lettering with "financial" under the "cap" ....

hey thanks for your feedback LVGirl!

ljnlaw 08-30-2006 08:46 PM

I agree with Gresch on both counts.

fln8tive 08-30-2006 08:54 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by rayxi
I like the last one. It looks more balanced and symetrical. Consider extending the letter P down just like the J so that the word FINANCIAL is centered between them. The logo looks a bit large relative to the name so make a few versions with varying sized to see which one works for you.

What he said.

skarletknite 08-31-2006 01:14 PM

imo, i wouldnt want to highlight a downward pointing triangle as in the top. you'll appreciate this - did u notice how they changed the NHL logo last year? they changed it from downward sloping to upward sloping...

statdoc 08-31-2006 09:38 PM

I agree with gresch, too.


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